Healthcare is coming along nicely. I mean, swerve, to that bad health care. You know what I mean? Yea, probably not because you aren’t as cool as me. Honestly, I do not get how people could ever give me bad healthcare. Especially a women doctor. She needs to care more about her job! I do not just want to be pushed off due to my weight. I work out all the time, I work hard to keep my body healthy, just sometimes I need help.
That woman doctor needs to hush. She should ask me more relevant questions. I hate when they just push me off. I need a place that feels warm and welcoming, not those boring old medical tables. Skeet off that if you know what I mean. Doctors sometimes act like they know my body more than me, hello, I am black and beautiful, of course I know my body more than them.
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